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When I was a student of literature & then a cub reporter, I thought that if I summed up the gist, I'd done my job. The best advice I ever got from an editor was to "write longer." You should too. You barely scratch the surface. This piece, as well as others, reads like an introduction. (I understand & appreciate that you're cranking these out, but even so, you stop too soon.) You're among friends. Take the risk.

Also, I bet a lot of those you observe would love to tell you their stories and have their stories told. I'm jealous that you have the "Oregon angle." Homelessness there seems to be different than elsewhere. Encampments seem such a luxury here.

Who sees these comments anyway? I see no others. Are they private or can we build a community here?

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